The table below gives information about the participation of 11-14 year-olds by gender in extreme sports in the UK in 2003.
The table below shows the information about extreme sports that 11-14 year-olds participated in by gender in the UK in 2003.
The table compares data about male and female in extreme sports. Overall, a smaller proportion of females took part in extreme sports. However, there is a rollerblading, where there is a smaller amount of males. Mostly, the amount of boys is about two times bigger than the number of girls.
In total, the biggest percent of participated is 26,6%, which is for rollerblading. The opposite situation is with snowboarding, which is only 6,1%. In addition, snowboarding has the smallest proportion of males and females separately. Despite the fact, that rollerblading has the biggest amount in total, the biggest percentage of boys is for skateboarding, which takes second place in total. Nevertheless, the smallest gap between males and females participation is for mountain climbing, where the percentage of males is 10,6% and the percentage of females is 9,3%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and the percentage of females is 9,3%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, second, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28481012658 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07123799209 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8635708828 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277287247251 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120693406722 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.256102150704 0.0843802449381 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337599631269 0.15604864568 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.382439766368 0.0819641961636 467% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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