Some people say television contributes more than other modern inventions to the quality of life of ordinary people. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that television plays a more essential role in our life than any other advancements of today’s world. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
To begin with, our daily activities will be seriously hindered without other modern innovations, whose functions cannot be performed by television. Firstly, nowadays, an average person is likely to spend a notable amount of time on roads travelling between, for example, his or her workplace and home. Therefore, the significance of vehicles such as cars and motorbikes cannot be denied. Secondly, a host of different important activities can be undertaken on our smartphones or laptops. These electronic appliances facilitate some of our very basic needs like working, exchanging information and getting access to almost limitless sources of information. They can also serve the purposes of entertaining and catching up with the latest current affairs, which are the core functions of television.
Of course, advocates of the aforementioned idea may argue that there are now smart televisions which can perform similar tasks fulfilled by a laptop. However, from my point of view, these so-called smart TVs are far to be able to completely replace laptops or computers in general. Numerous applications such as those published by Microsoft, which are considered to be basic yet useful ones on computers, cannot efficiently or even normally function on these enhanced versions of televisions. In addition, smart TVs usually come at exorbitant prices which are unaffordable for most of the general population.
To conclude, it is absurd, in my opinion, to argue that the contribution of television can outweigh that of other inventions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble for most of the general population. To conclude, it is absurd, in my opinion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in general, of course, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4776119403 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12757801881 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6514043904 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987472868485 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351447539008 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052693317585 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855760656375 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657359005715 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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