Some people believe that a good way to reduce crime is longer sentences. others may think that there are alternative ways to solve this problem. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Handful of clans opine that a great way to decline crime rate is by putting criminals behind the bars for longer period. Opponents may believe that there are other ways to solve this problem. This written discourse will discuss both perspectives and then offer a personal view point in upcoming fragments.
To embark with, lengthening sentences can make the guilty to be ashamed about their deeds and will give them a chance to clearly understand the difference between right and wrong. In addition to it, longer sentences can be an example for the other people and they would think twice before doing anything wrong.
On the contrary, people think that there are many other ways to handle this issue. Fristly, by counselling the culprits in the prison to understand their frame of mind and handle them so. Secondly, charging a large amount of fine as a punishment has to be paid by the offender to make them remorseful for their mistake. Moreover, penalty should be depend upon the type of offence. For instance, crimes like murder or rape and robbery or domestic violence, defaulters should be hanged and counseling should be helpful .
To sum up, I opine that crime can not be neglected whether it is a big or small ones and criminals should be punished as it will be a helpful for the society and for themselves as well. But the range of punishment must be determined by the crime. Sometimes, in anger or anxiety people take wrong steps and feel guilty for lifetime and then giving longer sentences only worsen the problem for such people. So, government should be first familiar with the crime and then penalized criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in addition, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83629893238 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49320035005 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.728735809 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205243216302 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089426130485 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115337725518 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144711288201 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113245755203 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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