An Ambition is Positive or Negative? Discuss both of views
Ambition is a strong desire to do or reach something. All of people in the world have to ambition in their life, because if they do not have ambition, they do not have direction. People believe that ambition has positive impact in their life. While several people agree with this statement, others disagree about it, because they think that ambition has bad influence in their lifetime.
Some people believe that ambition can make them easy to achieve their goal. Great ambition is the passion of the great character. According to Obama, ambition is when everyone should try to realize his full potential. When people want to drive fancy cars, and wear nice clothes, and have a good life and to accomplish these things, they have to work hard. But sometimes to reach it, people are lazy. So, to steer clear of this poverty of ambition to achieve our purposes, we need.
On other hand, several people think that if we have a big ambition, it is going to get negative impacts. People say that if we think too much about something or the way to get something that we want, we will become depression. For example, Fauzi Bowo, He is a former governor of DKI Jakarta, at the time, there were gubernatorial elections in DKI Jakarta and he wanted to become a governor again, but he had a great competitor, his name was Jokowi Widodo. He felt depression, because many people that lived in DKI Jakarta prefer to choose Jokowi become a new governor in DKI Jakarta than him. He did a big mistake, because he had done something stupid. He mocked his challenger in media social. He did not care about a bad impact that will happen at the time. He did not think about view of society for him, he just thought about his ambition to become a governor. To get their goals, some people are sometimes at the wrong way. They should think about something that they want, because they live in society.
In the end, to get positive or negative impact from your ambition is option. This is your life, you can make your life be better or become worse.
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All of people in the world have to ambition in their life,
All of people in the world have to be ambitious in their life,
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