Are the parents best teachers?
I am convinced parents are the best teacher for every child coming to the earth. There are no any learning college and University, which are able to replace with parent’s role and importance in our life. Since first seconds of appearing us on this earth, they will take care of us until we grown up and matured.
Parents are the most influenced and precious ones in our life. From the moment we were born, we were defenceless and very weak. Parents are the one who sacrificed everything to make us strong and independent. Parents are the one who taught us how to walk, talk and eat. Every day they spent immeasurable time with us to take care, feed and teach something new until we are grown up. They are the one who taught us how to respect others, express our feelings, love and how to take care of ones who we love. We are the true reflection of our parents. Our character is shaped by their personality and behaviors.
Parents sacrifice so many things of their life just to make sure for us a better life and teachers are the one who taught us subjects like math, biology, chemistry, history and ect. Teachers are the one who taught us how to read and write, but parents were the one who read every night stories until we fall asleep. Teachers teach us everything, which involves school programs, but parents are the one who teach us about life. I think I do not need to explain the differences between school subjects and life, these days every adult knows about it. Teachers always wanted us to get good grades to get a scholarship, but parents are the one who pays without hesitation if we fail and shows how family should take care for each other in a life.
The summary, things we learn from our teachers are important for our lives and those valuable lessons and knowledge help us to prepare for the future, but things we learn from our parents shapes who we are and who we become. The sacrifice our parents is much more important compared to sacrifice our traditional academic teachers and that is why in my opinion parents are the best teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 373.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54155495979 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40369420539 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479892761394 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8198297076 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06452816374 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26576774258 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109131484482 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128979251258 0.0662205650399 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199215188085 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814766832497 0.0443174109184 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.2367328918 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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