Living in a big city and small town.
I grew up in a small town and moved to a big city, which is why I experienced the good and bad sides of both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I was proved wrong. I think, by living in a small town I will never feel myself comfortable.
Firstly, big city and small town both have same problem like public transportation, but in separate ways. In a small town, you have to own a car to make sure comfortable living, as long as there is no public transportation you cannot get around without your own. Usually the big cities don’t have public transportation problems, however owning a car causes many problems in big cities. The big cities have heavy traffic and the parking is very expensive. Public transportation is not free, but it is cheaper than driving, considering the gas and insurance.
Secondly, living in a big city is more exciting than in a small one. In addition, finding a job is faster and salary is always higher. The amazing part of the big cities is the nightlife. By working all day, most of the city’s residence gets tired, so they usually chill out evening. There are many places where you can spend your time extremely good. For example, going to the dance clubs, karaoke, eating out at the restaurants, going to the different sport clubs, taking a walk in a quite and pleasant park or just watch TV at home. Internet is fast in big cities and it gives big opportunities. On the other hand, you will practically never face with lack of the supermarket’s problem. I remember that I had to drive other corner of the town to get to supermarket, when I used to live there. In addition, people who live in a small town have much chores to do and to take care of.
Thirdly, there is no nightlife in small towns, but the price for everything is cheaper than big cities. The best thing I like about small town is that fruits are delicious and products are more natural. The view of small towns are always beautiful and the air is cleaner, however it is too boring to live. There is not much to do. There are practically no entertainment places in a small town, which means you cannot go out evenings and weekends. The worst thing about small town is that you cannot go out with your girlfriend to favorite restaurant. Small towns are quite and very comfortable to live, however it is not so exiting.
In the summary, Living in a small town is good and quite enough, however living in a big city is much more enjoyable and exiting. I think I have already get used to live in a big city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in a big city, but I was proved wrong. I think, by living in a small town I will...
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Line 3, column 857, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n, people who live in a small town have much chores to do and to take care of. Thi...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...ble and exiting. I think I have already get used to live in a big city. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lready get used to live in a big city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47435897436 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64422882673 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459401709402 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.439116762 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59259259259 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.610814870861 0.236089414692 259% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178512216215 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134786328319 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398991860286 0.150856017488 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747649187898 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.