Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both sides abd give your opinion.
It is considered by some that, it is always a best method to access knowledge freely on internet and computer which will help to do scientific research, business and education. However, others argue that, the information has enormous value and importance, and it should not be a accessed by everyone freely. This essay intends to examine both the perspectives and I do believe that, even though free information helps to many people, all the information should not be free in the internet.
To begin with, since scientific breakthroughs need high financial backing, it often failed to complete the research work due to lack of funding. For instance, the free information about cancer on internet helped a poor physician, who is from Ireland, to come with a tablet which can cure skin cancer. Similarly, business industry is growing globally with the help of free information available in the internet. That is why, many new entrepreneurs emerging day by day with higher expectations on achieving success. Although many students make use of free information to complete their academic, it is often allow them to enjoy education with international standard. But, accessing free information is not always good for society.
On the other hand, in spite of the importance and value of information, people access it for disruptive purposes. To illustrate, the recent news from times of India reveals that, a group of students in Britain, who used free data about bomb making from the internet, and made a bomb which can destroy thousands of people. With the advancement of science and technology, people are able to do many things regardless of its positive benefits. Hence, it is important to keep the confidentiality of information.
In my opinion, accessing free data is a great blessing for the people who stuck with their work and study due to lack of money. But, it does not mean that, all the information should be made available free. It is the responsibility of governments to secure valuable and most important information from reaching the hands of a wrong person.
To summarize this topic, I would like to emphasize that, although free information is useful for the scientific progression, expanding business industry and increase the standard of education, we should not forget to freeze some information which may cause unfruitful effects on environment and the lives of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, for instance, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15128205128 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96313199441 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2547798654 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.176470588 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184502213212 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657690808839 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436261348214 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112181700385 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482685432685 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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