Some people say that should all subject taught to student in school . Other say that only one subject taught in which children learnt interesting . Discuss both views and relevant examples ?
A few an individual say that all subjects learnt in the learning institute but instead say that only one subject taught which pupils show keen interest, people said that so it should allow or not? I will discuss this essay both side in my upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, firstly, either all subject are children learnt in learning era so people believe they have acquired knowledge any specific field in depth because any knowledge at any time is played important role in their lives. secondly, an individual agree that it is quite essential to overall development of offspring in able- bodied . United state of America also implemented law on schools to cater all subject education to pupils.
Turning on other side, first and foremost is children learn only interesting subject so it becomes elegant engineer, Doctor, teacher and get a deeply knowledge towards fabulous subject. Moreover, student full fill own life demand to earn higher income in their lives. Further more, who has easier achieve ambitious in life and invent new technology in the future, if student show attraction towards favourite subject. A good illustration APJ kalam show interest in science field when he was childhood so in teenager he had invented missile weapon. So it is best example seem that favourite subject is beneficial for children.
To conclude, in my opinion either children should read all subject in life so they gain wide knowledge about world. However, pupils get ambitious of life and then easily aquire depth knowledge to specific field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15079365079 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55056198373 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.252418405 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342233991276 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108122666566 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116283272517 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20528844183 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134577988087 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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