TOPIC# 29 some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion?
We have inherited the Earth, but this does not mean that we can do everything with it. I strongly believe that human has noticeably hurt the earth by his varied detrimental activities in order to make it a better place for himself. I feel this way because nowadays, pollution has become a serious menace for all the world, forests and woods are dwindling, and the Earth is dreadfully heating up.
First, these days pollution has become a global problem. Industries and cars continuously pump their harmful emissions into the air that all the creatures breathe it in. Meanwhile, part of these toxic ...
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- TOPIC # 42 What is very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons... 90
- TOPIC # 51 Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? 90
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 61
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