When children start school, teachers have a bigger influence on their academic and social development compared to their parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
It is widely known fact that tutors are tend to be huge impact on growth of academic and personal enhancement of children as proportion to their parents. Children are more likely to obey the regulations teach by the teachers. Hence, I staunchly agree with the above-mentioned statement.
To begin with, behavior of the teachers play an important role in every child’s life. Childers would always love to go to school if their teachers are friendly with them. Whereas, children may avoid attending classes in strict environment, which will cause their rigid behavior. Children spend their more time in school in a day and they have to talk and mingle with others apart from family, so, teachers should watch them and teach good manners. As a result, the children learn how to behave in the society.
Primary school is a vital part for the children’s mental and social development. Because knowledge will improve child’s logical and learning skills. Moreover, children follow their teachers’ footsteps to solve the problems and answer to questions. So, if teachers have good skills and knowledge, which will asset to students. To add to this, there should be a mentor for everyone’s life to motivate and improve their skills. For instance, sport person will always have mentor or coach to improve their skills.
To recapitulate, I believe that teachers have a huge influence for the student’s success in academic and social development. However, parents are also important to make them responsible towards
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- When children start school, teachers have a bigger influence on their academic and social development compared to their parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...It is widely known fact that tutors are tend to be huge impact on growth of academic...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'mentored'.
Suggestion: mentored
...instance, sport person will always have mentor or coach to improve their skills. To r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...portant to make them responsible towards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28163265306 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93453208376 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.644572827 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279208439393 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883408162212 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511332865699 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163753837599 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351278480509 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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