You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a
day.
Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
Introduce yourself.
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that is caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation.
Dear Madam,
I am writing to present some of issues about australia flight.
My name Tien and I am 19 years old, I am an exchange student between Vietnam and australia. At previous time, I had a chance to study at australia university and familiar with countless culture in here.I built numerous relationship and australia made me purely attachment.
As such, the duration that I went to australia university was closed and I was obligatory to come back home.Nevertheless, your return flight was delayed by all day, this brings quite accidents. In particular, my mom called for me so much since she assumed that I had a problem such as breakdown plane. Moreover, delaying my flight waste countless time that I could spend for member family or friends.
Eventually, I would be most grateful if you could adjust the situations and reinforce the working quality in order to be satisfied clients requirement. I am looking forward to receiving from your response.
Your faithfully
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-20 | tien.xinh.ne | 73 | view |
| 2018-08-20 | m_rajaya | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the issues') or simply say ''some issues''.
Suggestion: some of the issues; some issues
Dear Madam, I am writing to present some of issues about australia flight. My name Tie...
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Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...familiar with countless culture in here.I built numerous relationship and austral...
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Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
... and I was obligatory to come back home.Nevertheless, your return flight was delayed by all ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from your response. Your faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07975460123 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99559941716 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705521472393 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1784982277 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203953660332 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787349373368 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510739762413 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10430675811 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608501573975 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.