some people get into debt by buying things that they don't need and can't afford.
what are the reasons behind it?
Which are the causes and steps for prevention?
Give your own ideas and experiences.
Nowadays,people are not satisfied with their basic needs.So,they want to buy unnecessary things which acts as a burden on their budget and sometimes it leads to financial crisis.This essay will discuss and try to curb this situation.
Financial management plays a significant role in life.When it is not proper balanced it drags people to take a lent from a bank or private corporations.After that when a person is not able to payback the amount he becomes bankrupt and go through depression.There are some reasons which influencing people to buy unnecessary things.The major reason is the excessive advertisement appearing on television.In addition,people manipulated by a celebrity who promotes fake products in adds.
Moreover,EMI are easily available on expensive products which attracts consumer to buy when they are low on budget.what is more,being in trend and to show off are another reason behind purchasing useless products.To exemplify,youngsters buy costly smartphones to show their royalty which is not appropriate way.For instance,In India youth is crazy for buying phones which costs a high amount of money.
It is important to manage finances to face future emergency conditions.Hence,it is not advisable to buy useless things to express your status.There are some possible solutions to prevent from getting into debt.Firstly,government should censor the fake advertisements of a product.Secondly,bank should analyze the financial condition of customer before providing support.Furthermore,increasing an interest rate will cut the number of customers from taking loans.Thirdly,parents should teach their child to live simple life despite using expensive products.Although,children often pressurize their parents to get them dear products,to fulfill it parents get into debt.
To sum up,simplicity is greatest sophistication and by living simple life no one will suffer from financial problems and get into debt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8480565371 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.22156646802 2.80592935109 150% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.87685785 49.4020404114 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.0 106.682146367 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6 20.7667163134 273% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.6 7.06120827912 391% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220696022417 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108934406885 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314133350807 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108934406885 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314133350807 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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