the chart shows information about the problem people have when they go to live in other countries
the chart gives information about the percentage of immigrants in each of three age group who have difficulties with three sorts of integration problems . this proportion varies in different ways for each of the three problems.
it is clear from the chart that sorting out healthcare is the most common problematic issue, with over 35 percent of people aged 35 to 54 and those over 55 dealing with it. More precisely, the 35-54 age group has the highest percentage , at around 37 percent, and the group of age that have second highest level of people dealing with this issue is the oldest group ( over 55 years old) , with just 1 percent lower. meanwhile, people in range 18-24 has the least percentage , at about 32 percent.
The next common obstacle to integrating that immigrants have to struggle with is financial troubles. 35 to 54 group is still the one that have the highest proportion of people facing with this problem , at 35 percent. this problem is less common for the youngest group (18-35 years old) , under 35 percent. The lowest one is the oldest group which has about 28 percent. similarly, finding schools for their children is the biggest problem that people aged 35 to 54 face (about 18 percent ). meanwhile, the other group do not finding hard to solve this issue ( 5 percent for those aged 18-34 and mere 2 percent for the oldest group).
All in all, the most significant problem issues that people at all age group have when they live in foreign countries is healthcare, especially the people aged 35-34 and over 55 .Whereas, finding school for children is less common than the others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, similarly, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7797833935 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46162775176 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462093862816 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0275359472 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189946807395 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813818861568 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061555094486 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134753895411 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476163025164 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.