Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely argued that women should participate in jobs that belong to men due to different qualities. Personally, although I assume that every person should choose the jobs that suitable for their gender. But I believe that regardless of men or women could do all the works as well.
In the one hand, the division between male and female when they apply a job is purely significant based on countless reasons. Firstly, in term of gender, each of person always has an extraordinary character so they could choose the job that suitable for their feature. Actually, male often brings strong character whereas the female. According to the statistics about jobs, female often have a chance to do a work involved in education or medical, even related to calculation because they could complete carefully and less errors. For instance, my sister has been an accountant for a long period since she could be patient when checking number. Another reason is that human bravery. Because the men could suffer from huge pressure and dare to investigate, they often stand a chance to triumph. For instance, Bill gates – a billionaire famous for over the world when he gave up studying in well-known university to generate money by himself. He used to overcome pressure involved in family and currency. Afterward, thanks to her bravery, he was successful.
In the other hand, currently, women are able to do work that used to belong merely men. As far as I know, people always assume that women are not possible to create a huge achievement in the past. Nevertheless, women also do a job as well as men. For instance, Mai Kieu Lien – consider like as a Vietnam businesswoman due to her success when she offers milk brand by herself that provides main milk in this country. The discrimination is depleted definitely when men choose the job related to women including teacher or doctor. Consequently, every person probably measures carefully before applying the job that suitable for themselves.
In conclusion, Although, I encourage people should classify the job according to their qualities but I could not deny that it would be better to choose the favorite jobs.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be better to choose the favorite jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96694214876 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72546062179 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548209366391 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3533941969 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290715719966 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904618210998 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762561380484 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193694294264 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105434265879 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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