Nowadays, with the advancement of technology and transportation facilities, people can work and live anywhere they want.
Discuss its advantages and disadvantages
family: Arial; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Currently, technology and transportation are developing at a rapid speed. As a result, people are able to settle in any part of the world. Yet, in what follows it will be shown that the primary advantage of this phenomenon is that people can gain prosperous opportunities in other counties and being apart from their loved ones is the main drawback.
family: Arial; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> having the chance to live and work in different parts of the universe, with the help of advanced technology and transportation, might be quite beneficial for many people, since this will enable them to achieve more. Some people from developing and undeveloped countries miss numerous chances of expressing their true talent and abilities due to lack of various resources. Moreover, they cannot find a proper job regarding their specialties and knowledge. Thus, issues like these can be tackled by moving to other countries.
family: Arial; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">On the other hand, being in another place can have negative aspects as well such as being homesick. people living far from their home mention that one of the obstacles that they face is missing significant events that are happening in their families and countries. For instance, my friend’s father could not attend her wedding ceremony because of his job in another country. it is obvious, modern technologies offer ample options for communication, however, the distance is still a barrier for the relationships.
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family: Arial; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In conclusion, it was demonstrated that while having limitless choices for living and working locations has positive aspects such as successful career, there are also disadvantages like missing friends and family to be taken into consideration. however, it is hard to deny that these days more and more people are leaving their homeplaces in order to obtain their ambitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.65204678363 5.12529762239 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.79721917242 2.80592935109 171% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.568502546 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.5 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942267578346 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413552984305 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277418798238 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575669638559 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447413670503 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.59 12.4159519038 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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