You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration.
In the letter, you should tell:
• what course you would like to attend
• give details about your educational background and work experience
• what reasons make you choose this college.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in a course which is scheduled at your college next month. The title of the course is “Project Management” and it will commence on 24th April, 2019. Also, its duration is two weeks.
I have completed Bachelor in Electrical Engineering from ABC University of Engineering and Technology Dehli and have worked with several prestigious multinational organizations, particularly Unilever, British Tobacco, and Coca cola. Currently, I am working as a Project Manager in P&G India. Owing to engagement in numerous projects, this course is vital for my further progress because it can help in-time and efficiently completion of project.
As this is one of the finest colleges in Sydney, therefore, I preferred this institute. In addition, one of my colleagues has recently completed a short course and he is really inspired by your teaching pattern. This is because although many other institutes are offering the same course, none of them focuses more on case study, which keeps your college distinct.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon about my enrollment possibility in it and would also like to hear about the accommodation facility.
Yours faithfully,
Salman Khan
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| 2019-03-27 | abed.joy | 78 | view |
| 2019-03-26 | Richa Dhiman | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...ment' and it will commence on 24th April, 2019. Also, its duration is two weeks. I...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...2019. Also, its duration is two weeks. I have completed Bachelor in Electrical ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dy, which keeps your college distinct. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
^^^
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty. Yours faithfully, Salman Khan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34673366834 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10106850018 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7690696835 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186363797522 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599690564832 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635448750185 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107526965804 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578231968168 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.