Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
governments all around the world are grappling with problem like rising unemployment and growing threats of terrorism. Poverty is still a issue in many countries likes Aisa, Africa, Latin America. In such a scenario, the argument that the government should stop wasting money on arts might sound Logical. However, in my opinions, arts do have a place in society. while i don't think that the government should waste a lot of money on arts, it should at least adopt a benevolent attitude towards arts and artists. In fact, they are also an industry with the great potential to gain money. Performance arts, for instance, enjoy considerable following. A music concert or dance show featuring an accomplished singer or dancers can create a lot of jobs. arts also can help sell a country as a tourism destination. For example, The Idian government actively uses traditional arts forms to promote tourism in country. India's Classical dance from like kathakali have enthralled audiences all over the world and attract thousands of international tourists to the nation. Painting also have a huge commercial value. Millions of people visit museums in Spain, Italy to admire the works of master likes Vicent van Gog, Picassio, etc. while these artists are no longer around their timeless working are still earning a lot of money for their countries. nations that promotes their ethnic arts and crafts aslo tend to enjoy good reputation overseas. To conclude, while it is true that spending money on impacting education and building infrastructure is more important than promoting arts, in my opinion, the government should still do whatever it can to promote and sustain arts. arts form, especially those that have a huge following, benefit the national economy in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, still, while, at least, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13194444444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72270935267 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.376440275 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170161763734 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508385289138 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530274952605 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170161763734 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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