some people prefer to buy local products while other prefer international products.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
With the globalization, as years goes by, there has been a continuous war between local and imported products. based on various researches and on what is commonly seen today, some people patronize their own local products and wants to buy international products. This essay will analyse both sides before showing its agreement or disagreement against local or imported products.
There were multifarious movements like "Go local", to boycott the imported product and promote local products. people believe that buying local products will boost economic development for their country and is inexpensive as compared to international products. For example, small local business creates employment opportunities and contributes to national income. Moreover, the local products are more pocket friendly than imported goods.
Conversely, consumers like imported products especially imported brands due to numerous reasons like a good reputation, assured quality, exclusivity and many more. The reputation of branded product is key reason which influence the buyers to purchase. Being able to buy international merchandise, often symbolize as higher social status in several countries. Furthermore, people have a perception whic believe imported products assures a good quality as compared to local products. To illustrate, sports shoes of imported brands like Nike, Reebok are often preferred over local brands like bata or liberty. Therefore excellence in quality and good reputation of international products inclines the consumer towards it.
To recapitulate, whether it is local or imported products both have their own merits and demerits. However, in my opinion, consumer should buy product based on his purchasing capacity and his preference. I would give importance to quality of product rather than its origin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83955223881 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97860072237 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1451256459 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296149097577 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100117402434 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555267734903 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188013731442 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306745618073 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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