People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
People's behaviour is determined by the environment they are brought in. Their behaviour is mostly developed by the people around them. It depends on the individuals how they
determine their behaviour. The forces around them will determine their behaviour.
When they are children their behaviour are mostly impacted by the peole surrounding them. They observe the people around them and adopt which seems right to them. Thhe peopele around them
are important factor for individuals behaviour. For example, in India people are more crazed about cricket. It's because almost all of Indian's love cricket. So by birth the child will
be surronded by these cricket enthusisatic people so it'll have impact on it's behaviour.
People as they grow up may change their behaviour. As they grow they'll have better understanding and so choose their behaviour. They may change some of their behaviour.
For example, an individual is being a introvert throughout his childhood. He may choose to change it or now depending on him. If that individual is surrounded by the people who are
extroverts. He may also change some of his behaviour changing his behaviuor.
The people's behaviour is mostly determind by the surrounding environment.So, the forces play an important role in people's behaviour.
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 33
- Our previous experience has been that our stores are most profitable in areas whereresidents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build oneof our new stores in Plainsville, which clearly has many such residents. Plainsville 33
- Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically.Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number 50
- As people rely more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to thinkfor themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- As people rely more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to thinkfor themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... Their behaviour is mostly developed by the people around them. It depends on the individuals how they...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... It depends on the individuals how they determine their behaviour. The forces ar...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding forces'?
Suggestion: The surrounding forces
...s how they determine their behaviour. The forces around them will determine their behaviour. When...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...them will determine their behaviour. When they are children their behaviour are m...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...a people are more crazed about cricket. Its because almost all of Indians love cric...
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Line 8, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...ay change their behaviour. As they grow theyll have better understanding and so choose...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r. For example, an individual is being a introvert throughout his childhood. He ...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to change it or now depending on him. If that individual is surrounded by the pe...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... individual is surrounded by the people who are extroverts. He may also change some of...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ehaviour changing his behaviuor. The peoples behaviour is mostly determind by the su...
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Line 12, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...etermind by the surrounding environment.So, the forces play an important role in p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32682926829 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85342921739 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 215.323595506 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507317073171 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3280811956 60.3974514979 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6666666667 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3888888889 23.4991977007 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169437849967 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760530332577 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662243934955 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951867150896 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079534979351 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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