In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in past.
Do you think its a positive or negative development?
In some nations, Lots of people prefers to live alone these days as compared to the past. This essay would argue this is a positive change because people become independent and it helps a country’s economy.
When people stay alone, they become self-reliant because there is no one to help them and they have to face all the problem individually. They are solely responsible for every success or failure they might get. This practice gives them the strength to face any challenges in their work life and help them to be successful in their respective careers. For example, The Times of India published a report which showed 53% of the top successful persons in Delhi were staying alone at some point in time in their life.
As well as that, a nation’s overall economy will grow if more individuals are living by themselves. This is because each person has to buy their own stuff, such as home appliance and furniture, as they are not going to share these things. As a result, the demand for these products will raise which further lead to an increase in production. It means more jobs for people and more tax for the government. For instance, Delhi School of Economics published a report which showed that people who live alone spend 56% more money on buying home stuff than those who were staying in shared accommodation.
In conclusion, the growing trend of peoples’ choice to live alone is a beneficial development as these people become more autonomous and it creates more jobs which help the economy to grow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re jobs which help the economy to grow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80377358491 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58043684778 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5066929007 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146043233891 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594469946919 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653665033357 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1096664776 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559818042798 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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