You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Sonia,
I hope this letter meet you in good health. I am writing you this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the state of some of the furnitures in our rented apartment.
my name is Wayne Rooney, we work in the same department in Halliburton. I am the new guy that was transferred in from Nigeria last month.
The condition of some of the furniture in our accommodation are appalling. The door of the kitchen cabinet is broken and as a result of this, it can't be closed, the cupboard in my wife bedroom are worn out and disgusting. Also, the legs the chairs and tables in the sitting room are either cracked or broken. Consequently, they can't be sit on or used.
I would like the suggest that the landlord should fix these broken furniture within two weeks or I would be forced to ask for a refund of my rent.
Best wishes
Wayne Rooney
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sonia, I hope this letter meet you in good heal...
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Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ss my dissatisfaction with the state of some of the furnitures in our rented apartment. ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...furnitures in our rented apartment. my name is Wayne Rooney, we work in the sa...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...Nigeria last month. The condition of some of the furniture in our accommodation are appa...
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Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t is broken and as a result of this, it cant be closed, the cupboard in my wife bedr...
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Line 6, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...t is broken and as a result of this, it cant be closed, the cupboard in my wife bedr...
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Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r cracked or broken. Consequently, they cant be sit on or used. I would like the...
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Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ant be sit on or used. I would like the suggest that the landlord should fix these brok...
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Line 10, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for a refund of my rent. Best wishes Wayne Rooney
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52229299363 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65485164388 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643312101911 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2261392441 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114337894407 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444285739335 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675891005354 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681994118245 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880370220437 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.