social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups . however,sharing personal information on social media website does have risks.
do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays,it can be observed that social media has become first preference of all individuals. however,there are some chances of risk while sharing personal information on social media. It has more advantages than disadvantages which will be discussed further.
TO begin with a number of advantages of social media, first of all,it can be seen that majority of people are leving close to everyone,as well as they are able to discuss many topics with their friends of social media. Apart from this, people can also get a great deal of information about politicals and up coming technology throuh social media which are hard to find in books or other things. Moreover, due to hard work many people feel stressful and confront some physical pains in some parts of body. These problems can be minimize while spending time on social media for any purpose. This is possible because there are not only gather to information, but also it is well kown as great source of entertainment. Consequently, it can bring a great deal of happiness in every person life.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of social media. First of all, there are many chance of leaking information on social media. This because the people of the sophisticated era are smarter and clever. These kind of people alwasy try to do cyber crimesvfor earing money in wrong way while using the information of other people. in this case mostly innocent people become victims.Secondly, the life style of those people getting destroyed who tend to consume much of their time on socila media. weak eye site is also main disadvantage. Futhermore, due to this development the importance of physical exercise is decreasing day by day. This because people like to like stya online with social median rther than doing physical exercise.
in conlusion, there is no surprise it has more advantages than disadvantages which can be solved if people chnage their attitude towards the usage of social media.
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| 2019-03-30 | newwritter | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, kind of, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76996366522 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7676098188 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324168243827 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119391760461 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112354535746 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236217504677 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595996273509 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.