Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you were unable to attend. Write a letter to apologize for your absence. In your letter:
• State why you could not go
• Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner
• Suggest another time to meet
Dear Ana,
Hope you are in the pink of your health. I assume that your 25th birthday bash was rocking and full of fun and frolic.
I sincerely apologise for not being at the party. I am sure you might be wondering the reason for my absence from the day. The evening when I was about to leave for your place, my mother slipped from the stairs and twisted here ankle.
Considering the situation, we immediately rushed to the orthopaedic. Thankfully, she was diagnosed with a sprain and was later hospitalised to check for internal injuries if any. Since my father was overseas for business work I had to be with my mother for two days.
I understand that you might be annoyed with me because of the un-informed absence. To make this up, I have planned a badminton game followed by a lunch and a long drive during this weekend. I will pick you up from your place at 10 in the morning. I am excited to hear everything about the celebration.
Your Friend,
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52840909091 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5809154852 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0106942048 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.3076923077 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276130846699 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107374331842 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967269065829 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158429221896 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774111606434 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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