Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults. Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Sports are the imperative aspect of life to keep ourselves healthy and happy so it must be considered as the indispensable part of our life-style until death. Nowadays many adults are following sedentary routine due to various reasons which will be covered in the following essay including some solutions to curb this problem.
In the present era, everybody is so indulge into work related activities that they forget to maintain the healthy status for their own body. Sports are crucial to rejuvenate the brain and other vital organs but many people, due to long working hours as well as tough commuting services, are not able to give themselves enough time. For instance, according to one survey, every private job worker spends one-fourth of his total life span in traffic while heading towards his workplace. Secondly, modern technological era offers numerous gadgets which literally consumes a lot of time such as game applications, Facebook, Twitter and Whatsapp.
Individuals could be involved in health related activities by initiating camps where doctors, nurses and pharmacists can motivate people and make them aware about the detrimental effects of deskbound life-style. Moreover, employers could instigate the sports day event to encourage employees to participate in various activities and could offer special gifts to the winners. It would eventually stimulate some indolent people as well to change their attitude towards sports.
In conclusion, people must join some sports or health club to follow active life-style despite of their busy schedule which would ultimately bring joy and happiness in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44881889764 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72682065254 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688976377953 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.4612016612 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.4 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122695953139 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438426524025 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372022553327 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070206462201 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315292273669 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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