Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults. Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Sports are one of the activity which increase our nation pride. Most of the individuals are involved in sports at their young age but stop when they are adults. Reasons behind keeping an end to their physical activities can be briefly explained in the following essay.
On the one hand, in this modern life people became too busy in their life routine. One don’t have time to spend for sports and doing exercise. For instance, a person has to rush to office at early hours and return to home by late night. Because of, heavy work at office and also due to heavy traffic. However, as one become an adult they also have family responsibilities which make them to end up their interest towards games. All the teenagers reject to choose sports as their career because of no knowledge regarding the improvement of a person in sports. So, an individual should also know how they are benefited in their future by selecting sports as their career. Then only one can show interest into sports.
On the flip side, Individuals must a lot some time for regular exercise and for a walk of at least for 30 minutes in a day. Additionally, this helps them to increase their health. At the same time, encourage themselves towards sports. Including games and yoga in one's life will also develop a special interest on sports. Indirectly, this also help our nation.
After having considered all the above mentioned points, we can finally draw a conclusion that every individual should include some physical activity in their daily schedule. So that one can develop their health and peace of mind. One can also include yoga which makes a person to develop patience in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, then, as to, at least, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83044982699 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47657576529 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2088258687 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4736842105 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144853005121 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481959334174 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063831275019 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100356132864 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745259294184 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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