one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expantancy is increasing .Do you think
the advantages of disadvantages?
some people believe that, government should improve medical care.what maybe citizens living longer life on earth and person would demand upsurge life proportion .Then it is wait government can solve problem.There are manifold reason.This essay would throw some light on all aspects to see in the right perspective.
Gone on the days, todays technology is very fast.Hence,people easily connect with abroad countries For examples,australia,new Zealand ,England and london and so on.I think that, life is gold period in our life.Otherwise, citizens could learn new thing like bad or good experience in our life.we should gain doing work day by day.Most of people have stress about work pressure .Then, adolescent life can rose todays.
Nevertheless,there are no denying ,in my point of view, government doing the work good facilities health life style of civilization.As well as, better education skills, environment, hospitals have to open 24 for hours per day.Addition,person do not interest in outgame like football,tennis and cricket extra.Most of youth,pupils they does not involve any activities.They always like introvert himself .So,they should not discuss problem for parents and forefather.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand government giving good ability for the person.They have good opportunity people are check medical store.on the hand other, it is no doubt people would happy their life and they will be long living in their life.So,thus pros outweigh cons .
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hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for example, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57522123894 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34950117838 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699115044248 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7240757721 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 315.0 106.682146367 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203330819185 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120785401671 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457086668495 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120785401671 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457086668495 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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