Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
playing games on computers and electronic devices, one of the most important leisure activities, has several direct impacts on users, the young in particular. While it is believed that playing such games can probably sharpen a variety of essential skills of players, I would argue that it is a waste of time.
On the one hand, several young people play video games which is a way to approach the modern technology as well as to release from stress, recharge battery after a hard-working day. In addition, these games greatly cultivate creativity of gamers along with logical thinking, problem solving skills. For instance, the useful skills gained by playing strategy games may be beneficial to finding the way if you go astray in the forest. Finally, shooting games, like Counter Strike, require tremendous focus and extremely fast reflexes to complete stages in those games, can be helpful in the young’s real life.
However, it is obvious that these advantages are outweighed by the drawbacks. Spending hours on those games gives rise to neglect of school assignment and inadequate development of skills. Additionally, not only does it result in many health problems such as eye-related diseases, obesity and so on, but it is also harmful to the users’ conceptions because several games involve violence and sex. Furthermore, players exposed to this kind of entertainment on a frequent basis can be addicted to them.
In conclusion, playing video games may help the young to enhance a few crucial skills, but it seems to me that it is more likely to be a time-wasting. Meanwhile, it would be better if the young spent time with their families or on other healthy and educational options, such as reading books or participating in sport clubs.
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- Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Playing
playing games on computers and electronic devic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12110726644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84535125327 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629757785467 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1179613604 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251099367754 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774957199547 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614131154873 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144233760504 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735595536813 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.