You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sally,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to inform you that I won’t be able to start an English course scheduled next week due to some problems. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I am travelling to Singapore for an important conference which is scheduled next week. Although I tried to post phone this trip however due to an important product launch at the event the trip couldn’t be rescheduled. Additionally, there are some important business meetings which require my presence. Though I was eagerly looking forward to joining this course and acquire skills as I have to speak at important conferences and events however due to work exigencies I wont to able to join the course on time.
Hence I would suggest to realign me with a fresh batch in mid of April as I will be back in India at that time. I look forward to your response and seeing you when I join the course.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...to able to join the course on time. Hence I would suggest to realign me with a fr...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest realigning'.
Suggestion: suggest realigning
...n the course on time. Hence I would suggest to realign me with a fresh batch in mid of April a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hen I join the course. Yours sincerely Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66467065868 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69947664459 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8784110557 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270806355244 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101575518617 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835263195302 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183326142491 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973715781728 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.