Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes -the government or the people who build homes ?

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Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes -the government or the people who build homes ?

Home is essential for every human being and they want to build their houses with modern amenities. However, with continuous increase in population, the demand for building new houses and buildings are also increasing. Now the question here is who should be responsible for safety standards while building homes? Some people believe that government is responsible whereas others think that everyone should follow safety ethics. this essay will discuss both points of view.

To begin with, government should set safety codes and measures which must be made mandatory to follow while building homes. In addition, we must take idea from Western countries infrastructure for an instance how they are building skyscrapers without compromising on safety standards and quality. Same set of safety guidelines must be spread all across the India. Also special attention must be taken while building houses in calamities prone areas such as Bhopal which is frequently hit by earthquakes or areas in Kerala which are hit by floods almost every year.

Apart from government, other people such as builders, owners and even labours must be held responsible for safety measures. Owners must not hesitate to spend extra bucks in building quality houses and builders on the the other hand must not break the owner's trust, instead they must deliver what they promise. Furthermore, labours must adhere to all the safety guidelines what government has set for them as one's life is more precious than anything in this world.

Thus, Recapulating the above essay it is not only government responsibility but every citizen who build their homes must be aware of the safety codes and must follow them with due diligence due to their own safety.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, apart from, in addition, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25179856115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57527831158 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3371446899 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3783800791 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152106556389 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109633464123 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248119942181 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110306235954 0.056905535591 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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