Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes -the government or the people who build homes ?
Security of the structure of a building is more relevant today,though is a joint accountability of the local government ,development authorities and citizens to ponder upon safety requirements according to ones geography.major onus in driving such standards lies with government
Firstly,on a macro level depending upon geographical and weather what should be the ideal safety measures taken will be decided after thorough research by architects and urban town planning depeartment.this would lead in creating a final blue print of basic and advanced safety and security perspectives for the public to adhere too.For instance ,if a particular area or a state is under high seismic zone ,then the foundation of residential buildings should be more strong specially in case of high-rise structures.
Secondly ,due to limited land availability in and around cities ,there is an upward trend in building of societies with flats rather than independent houses.In this,local authorities clave our guidance for such high rising residential accommodations keeping in mind various eventualities like earthquakes,fire,floods etc .Because of higher number human lives involved clear exit route and assembly points should be well planned to minimise loss.Clear expectation from the authorities will also help in creating right demand for safety equipment’s like fire extinguishers and alarms.Admitedly ,this will lead to technological innovations and economies of scale .Regular audit for safety measures will make sure high compliance rates.
To close ,day-to-day implementation of safety measures has to be driven by people in large ,but right direction and approach has to be set by government agencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75793650794 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49556777636 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65873015873 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 286.449918058 49.4020404114 580% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 483.666666667 106.682146367 453% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.0 20.7667163134 404% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219956059103 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142110776514 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353318263783 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128634263045 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148206451021 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.7 13.0946893788 364% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.7 50.2224549098 -61% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.4 11.3001002004 340% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.19 8.58950901804 154% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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