Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before travelling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
With an unprecedented surge in the globalization, both international as well as local tourism have become predominant. A lot of people are travelling for the purpose of enjoyment. However, some affluent people prefer travelling to other parts of the world, whereas, others consider travelling locally, considering their strict budget and love towards their nation. In my opinion, both the options are worthwhile, but before opting for international tourism, an individual should explore his own country first.
There are a plethora of factors behind preferring local tourism over global tourism. Travelling within the country, firstly, is a cost effective option as the travel expenses is greatly reduced as domestic flights are much cheaper than international flights. Therefore, if one has a tight and constraint budget, then, domestic tourism is the best option. Cultural understanding of one’s own country, secondly, is very important to have and it is always recommended to get to know about our own culture and traditions before others. Finally, local tourism would greatly help boosting our own economy since tourists generally pump enormous amount of money into the local economy they visit. Therefore, it is obviously a better option to uplift our own economy first.
On the other hand, other people argue that cross-boundary travel will help us learn about other cultures and see the great wonders such as, the Great Wall in China and St. Petersburg’s Palace in Russia. There is no denying the fact that travelling the world is a wonderful experience. However, it is also true that not all people can afford it. Furthermore, a better option is to cut-down on travel expenses by switching to domestic excursions and invest more in education and health of our family.
From the above argument, it can be concluded that both local and international tourism have their own pros and cons, and to select one among them is more of a personal choice, which depends on financial circumstances of an individual. However, in my opinion, considering the benefits the local tourism brings to one’s own nation, domestic tourism must be encouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...n the globalization, both international as well as local tourism have become predominant. ...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended getting'.
Suggestion: recommended getting
...very important to have and it is always recommended to get to know about our own culture and tradi...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to boost' or 'boost'.
Suggestion: to boost; boost
...nally, local tourism would greatly help boosting our own economy since tourists generall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95249067165 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565597667638 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5446238925 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232748523255 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759928427126 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659591628436 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143862975575 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646236468703 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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