The local council is about to destroy children playground in your area because it is under use. Write a letter and tell them:
• The importance of this playground
• Why it is not well used
• What can be done so more people can use it.
I am Mala Thalamuthu, one of the dwellers of peter avenue. I am writing to you with regard to the recent announcement by city council about the destruction of local children playground.
I would like to draw your attention on the significance of having a playground in this area. Children were utilized more efficiently when it was constructed newly. Not only it was popular for varieties of entertainment equipment but also establishes the acquaintance among children and forging the new relationships.
Sadly, over the past few years, the municipality has stopped the regular maintenance. As a consequence, the play area and apparatus have being destroyed gradually. Besides, some delinquents gather in the evenings, so that the parents were restricting their children to play here.
I strongly believe that the feasible actions towards the renovation process by allocating the required budget will be extremely beneficial for the children. In addition, to ensure the safety, some police officers could be assigned for patrolling the playground.
Your sincere attention and prompt actions are deeply appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Mala T
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uction of local children playground. I would like to draw your attention on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, well, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57954545455 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19057237281 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704545454545 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2158680314 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190583498771 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061412472202 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520340236701 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857907859742 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349822220593 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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