The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart provides data on the proportion of people donating money to charity in different age groups in Britain in the year 1990 and 2010.

It can be seen that a major of 36-50 age group could be observed in 1990 while 51-65 year old adults represented the greatest proportion of people giving money to charity in 2010.

First of all, the figure was highest in 36-50 people at around 42% , nearly three times the number of people aged 18-25 (over 15%) in 1990. Around 35% of 51-65 year old people donated money to charity in the same year, followed by 26-35 and over 65 age groups with slightly over 30% in 1990.

In 2010, the rate of British people aged 51-65 reached a peak at nearly 40%. The figure of British people aged 36-50 and over 65 giving money to charity accounted for 35%, followed by the percentage of people aged 26-35 at around 25% . However, interestingly, there was just over 5% of people aged 18-25 donating money to charity in 2010.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the number of people aged 18-25 over 15% in 1990. Around 35% of 51-65 year old p...
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...aged 18-25 over 15% in 1990. Around 35% of 51-65 year old people donated money t...
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...nearly 40%. The figure of British people aged 36-50 and over 65 giving money to c...
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...ntage of people aged 26-35 at around 25% . However, interestingly, there was just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53714285714 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19792165169 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497142857143 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9235354067 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281110133005 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163008964873 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575623518619 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205430299901 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478037876923 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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