The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps display some changes which have taken place in the town of Castellon in Spain between the year 2000 and today.
Overall, it is clear that the principal changes to the town were the developments of public services and the constructions of a more environmentally-friendly transportation.
Looking at the map of Castellon in 2000, we can see that the public services were quite poor with just three common facilities (a university, train station and old market). The second map shows the town has been upgraded and covered with new and modern constructions. Both sides of the university now has a new shopping centre and dormitory. The previous train station has been now rebuilt and moved in front of the university. The old market has been knocked down to make way for a new shop. The eastern and port areas that were left undeveloped are now occupied with newly-built buildings such as a cinema, bars and clubs along the coast, under-constructed airport and new covered market in the east.
Currently, the motorway running from the west to east has been converted into a pedestrian street. The city centre now accommodates a lot of bikes for rent. There is a tramline connected the city centre with the university at the present.
- The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket A B and C in the city of Pellington Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 80
- The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The map shows proposed plans for the development of the old college campus to be completed by 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that the people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92417061611 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08204120842 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3102918385 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822128968253 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316552029122 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289987008737 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054695669661 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254489564257 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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