Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays, the presence of technology aggravates the complexity of human life. Accordingly, there are numerous people who are of the opinion that ability to plan and organize is crucial for modern life. I believe to this statement and I elucidate my viewpoint by three supports.
First and foremost, learning to plan should be thought to the kids in early stage of their childhood because planning is not kind of ability to be learned at one night. Children must internalize it if they desire to apply it in future. For instance, A mother are able to teach her little child to set his room after every play, but it is difficult to compel her husband to wash the dishes. In this way, child are more likely to organize and learn self discipline. Therefore, they manage to benefit from it in latter difficult situation.
Additionally, modern life are prone to expose an unexpected conditions. Actually, one solution to overcome the unpredictable future is to be organized. Actually, childhood is the best time to practice this kind of situation by playing or watching informative cartoons. A classic example is a cartoon I saw when I was a child. In a cartoon the man was a scientist who was spending most of his time in his lab. Although, he had a lot of work to do, he played with his children and scheduled his work in a notebook.
Finally, development are progressing quickly which never stop for anyone to prepare herself to continue. That is why, it is more significant for young people to adapt themselves with change as soon as possible, Again, the best way to handle the complex life is to have plan to every event.
In conclusion, I personally agree complex life need plan and young people should be organized to make their lives to reduce the uncertainty they may confront.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ternalize it if they desire to apply it in future. For instance, A mother are able to tea...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
... life are prone to expose an unexpected conditions. Actually, one solution to overcome the...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...y to handle the complex life is to have plan to every event. In conclusion, I per...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sonally agree complex life need plan and young people should be organized to make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78387096774 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78056470208 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0520901354 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2352941176 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25112419278 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642132555967 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805461434882 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147071035301 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074591231878 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.