Some people argue whether it is a good idea to take a gap year before university. Discuus both sides and give your own oponion.
Many young people after graduated school do not apply document to the universities immediately. Often they become the so-called “gappies” - that is, those who decided to live for a year, as they like before they start studying at the university. Therefore, some people argue whether it is a positive or negative trend to take an intermission for a year before university. this given essay will consider both aspects of this issue.
On the one hand, a gap year assists students find an appropriate profession. Frequently, it is difficult to schoolchildren to make the right decision in choosing a future career; thereby being under pressure of their parents children may select the wrong profession. However, this will not happen if the teenager see all opportunities without haste. In addition, a young person may earn money during the period of recreation. money which this person earns will give the sense of independency and self-confident and these money may help in future payment for the university.
On the other hand, sometimes after the gap year, people are long parted with the idea of enrolling in a university and getting a higher education. if in the future it is still needed, it will require much more strength. For people who have just graduated from school, it is difficult to find a job, respectively, these people need to ask financial assistance from parents, but not all parents willing to provide with money adult children who do not attend university and do not work.
To conclude, I believe that this is a good experience for young people to take a gap year. this may help person find himself and create the foundation for the future successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02491103203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91829967865 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8176941492 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203586423318 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713094604477 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924798916697 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122746294388 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609294224209 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.