Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Agree to this arrangement.
– Say what time is suitable for you.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
Dear Friend,
Today I received your message telling me that you will send your son to our house this weekend to spend some time with the kids.
From my side your child is welcomed at anytime. My kids will be excited for Jeff visit, they can play at the backyard and have some fun since Saturday is a sunny day.
I suggest arriving at 11:00am; since I need to clean out the house and after I will go out for shopping to bring grocery for lunch and dinner.
Afternoon, I was thinking to take them to the Mall to have desserts and after they can watch the latest Lion King movie, if you don not mind. When the film done we will be back home around 8:00pm. I will prepare for dinner and waiting for your arrival, both your husband and you to eat and spend the night together.
Thank you and expecting your visit all at the end of this week.
Sincerely Yours,
- People should be responsible for the pollution problems caused by transportations, while others think the government should be held accountable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Write about the following topic.Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. 78
- Write about the following topic.Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- You live in a block of flats your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you Write a letter to your landlord In your letter you should explain the situation tell him her how you are effected by this suggest what you want the landlord 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26219512195 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95665211712 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7289383484 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232892689197 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899865694308 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835078569814 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131740008116 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05784143002 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.