1. Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
hardly can anyone deny the increasing popularity of culture is affected by tourism. Although it is argued that it is losing the meaning of culture. I am think that tourism is one way to preservation of a culture.
On the one hand, there are a wide of reasons why it is often believed that some events are organized for the tourists which will be changed the thinking of travellers about local features. Moreover, many people travelling from all over the world that the cultural identity is mixed, no longer merely before.
On the other hand, I am convinced that tourism is a good way to introduction and preservation of culture. First, tourists will share their experience in the local culture with their families and friends the places they come when they return home. After that, the historic places or culture heritage will become famous. it will be recognized in the travel industry newspaper pages. The more tourists come to visit, the better finance and technology will be improve to protection of natural and culture resources.
In conclusion, while som argue that culture will be ruined by tourism, I hold the belief that it is the way of protecting a culture.
- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63649388393 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9148254058 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307412078567 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116368131531 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761742378066 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198221634031 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729764930409 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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