It is claimed that living in a foreign nation who have different language could lead to devastating social and practical problems.
It is claimed that living in a foreign nation who have different language could lead to devastating social and practical problems. To some extent, I acknowledge that living in another country with another language may cause specific problems for the individuals concerned, however, these issues could be addressed efficiently provided that immigrants assimilate the language and the culture of the host country in advance.
It is true to say that residing in another country can cause serious problems in terms of the daily routine activities for some residents. The first and foremost challenge could be a misunderstanding of others, which may lead to having a wrong conception on different occasions. Due to the fact that in a society people are supposed to interact with others, if they do not understand the language, they will feel lonely and may suffer from mental health. In a practical point of view, in order to receive proper service from various sectors such as hospital and police, citizens have to know their language very well to fulfill their needs.
On the other hand, there are many foreign people who are living in another country with a different language from their mother tongue, and they do not have any problem regarding social and practical aspects. If the public who are going to immigrate grasp the language in advance and apply it very well, they do not face any problem in this regard. As a case in point, nearly 35% of people in the USA are not native in some cosmopolitan cities; however, they do not have any vexing problem.
To sum up, it is obvious that if the immigrant does not know the language they will face problems not only in their social life but also in action. Nevertheless, this is not true to say that every individual living in a different country will incontrovertibly encounter these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68082870355 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496794871795 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.957400325 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360996686132 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170805309999 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.272579468781 0.0667982634062 408% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230616529744 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164205270059 0.056905535591 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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