If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
‘Dream is not that which you see while you are sleeping, it is something that does not let you sleep’ saying by A P J Abdul Kalam. While some people can argue that to take any steps to do for a worthy goal is not legitimate, but others would state that it is justifiable to take any necessary steps to obtain your goal. In my view, for a worthy goal, it is justifiable to do any cost of hard work.
Firstly, to do any novel work there are a lot of limitation and complexity there. When Mark Zuckerberg starts ‘face mash’ there are many negative comments he received during that time. But Mark knew that his work is worthy and one day this will change the world. He takes many strong decisions to fulfill his dream. And today we can surely see that he was not wrong that time.
Secondly, the mother of humanity, prime minister of Bangladesh starts a big project named Padma bridge by people tax money. Without taking any loan from world bank, she decided to do it by her own motherland people. Which is definitely a great job so far. If this project will successfully be done, then a huge part of people of Bangladesh will get advantage of it. Nevertheless, any means taken to obtain this project are justifiable for this worthy goal.
But always remember the other’s suffering when any goal is to fix. Sometimes many praiseworthy works just be a total waste when not considering other sufferings. By hampering others life no goal could be worthy enough and take any action is not considered justifiable.
In conclusion, from the hypothesis it can be state that any necessary steps is justifiable for attaining a praiseworthy goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to do it by her own motherland people. Which is definitely a great job so far. If th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69178082192 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71459363029 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8209458501 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5882352941 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224770910906 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666791746377 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766369375982 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122478251331 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515664121815 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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