The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extend do you agree or disagree
Vehicles are one of the most useful inventions in human history. On the one hand, they can make people’s lives easier and more comfortable, on the other hand, they harm the environment and the people through releasing many poisonous gases to the atmosphere. that being so, while I mostly agree that alternative forms of transport should be encouraged, I still believe that some international laws must be enacted and implemented in a way that those alternative forms do not violate basic human rights and liberties.
First and foremost, either because of lack of public transportations or their uncomfortable conditions, people tend to use their own car. In this modern and technological world, producing a car take just 10 seconds and people have an opportunity to find a car which suitable for all budget. also, due to low prices of gas people can drive hundreds of miles away and it cost almost lower than public transportation’s tickets. For instance, when I moved to the USA I was living in nashville and I had a language school in Murfreesboro taking 45 minutes from nashville by a car. I did not have any car, therefore, to go to school, I had to wake up 5 am and change 3 different buses to arrive at my school at 8:30 am. I could tolerate this situation just 1 week and then I had to buy a car giving my whole savings. If there was a good transportation network, I would rather ogto school with buses. that being so, public transportations should be extended such as trains, buses, tram etc. to reduce the harmfulness of using cars.
With respect to international laws, I always support rules making life easier and livable. Restriction or trying to control automobile companies is not going to tackle problems, it can create other problems such as either big automobile companies can try to resist to obey those rules or have to fire their employees because of their economic problems. As far as I am concerned, making international laws which sponsoring big companies can solve this problem sufficiently. For the sake of example, cars which able to work with electric such as some of Tesla’s cars can solve the scarcity of fuels, atmosphere pollution and even sound pollution. I am sure that people will able to find many solutions along with technological improving but for now, producing cars working with electric is the best idea.
To sum up, even cars population have been increasing day by day, technology is also improving as the same level. therefore, both people should be encouraged about extending public transportation numbers and varieties and they should help big companies producing cars working with electric by their international laws. those processes will not only make our life healthier but also we are going to left a more livable world to our children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, even so, for instance, such as, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 26.3917525773 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 937.175257732 250% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 474.0 206.0 230% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94303797468 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 3.78020617076 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99532964455 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 127.690721649 207% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 290.88556701 248% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1257166257 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.15 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216023168807 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644615964942 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579043843427 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135484056224 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401118823205 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 41.2886597938 240% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.