Even though globalization affects the world’s economy and society in a positive way, its negative side should be not forgotten. Discuss both sides. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
The process of globalization has affected on various aspects of human life over the world. Some people argue that it makes both of positive and negative influences to the global economy and society. This essay will discuss both sides of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, globalization gives a lot of advantages to the world's economy and society. Through this process, countries have chances to expand their international relationships which help them to learn more and apply smart technologies from others in order to develop themselves economic infrastructures better. In addition, the globalization creates good conditions for promoting exchanges of cultures among societies. Basing on that, people from one country can understand customs, lifestyle and religions different. So they will gain a common knowledge and interest to build a peace over the world easier.
On the other hand, besides great impacts, globalization gets some disadvantages to our economy and society. Focusing on common features may be harm to maintain cultural identities of ethnic groups. People in many places will wear the same clothes from the same brand, ignore their traditional items. Moreover, when setting a standard over different societies, globalization can make conflicts among groups.
In conclusion, globalization has both sides, positive and negative, in impacting on the world's economy and society. Understanding these influences, we need promote advantages and limit disadvantages for flourishing our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...zation gives a lot of advantages to the worlds economy and society. Through this proce...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...itive and negative, in impacting on the worlds economy and society. Understanding thes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66814159292 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09046327764 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4853375871 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146239425766 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567133819576 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580641929296 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102864427524 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563618694314 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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