Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work for helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter, explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital.
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do.
Give details of when you would be available for the work.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you of my keen interest in some voluntary work as advertised by the hospital. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I have been associated with a plethora of non-government organizations which help the local community by providing socio-economic support especially to the adolescents and elderly people. although it spoils my free time however I get immense satisfaction by helping the people in need in whatever way I can by doing voluntary work for such organizations. Additionally, I get a proud feeling that I am a part of a cause which can help uplift people from poverty and bring more equality in society.
Although, I don't have any preference for a type of work I would like to do a hospital however it would be better I could be thankful if could involve me in renovation work at the hospital like painting as I have done such works in my past life. Lastly, I would be available on weekends from 9 am to 5 pm at your service.
I look forward to your response and consideration.
Yours sincerely
Said<br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
... to the adolescents and elderly people. although it spoils my free time however I get im...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re equality in society. Although, I dont have any preference for a type of work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70744680851 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09442375123 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9549412368 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383733138233 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117940824935 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865755741087 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178325487213 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980504899079 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.