People remember special gifts or resents that they receive. Why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Write at least 250 words.
A gift always brings a smile on one's face. Be it an expensive gift or a modest one, presents always manage to light up a person. And if it's a special one then, needless to say it makes one's day.
Regardless of age, presents make a person feel special and important. As a child I used to always look forward to my birthday as that was the day I got lots of gifts. On that day everything seemed special but today after a decade, if asked to recollect my birthday gifts, I can remember only a few. The reason being these were very special gifts given to me by my parents and my close friends. I still remember the wrist watch gifted to me by my father on my 10th birthday. It was very unique for its time. I wore it to school every day and proudly showed it off to one and all.
Special presents are generally given to mark special occasions or to celebrate milestones. It always shows affection, love and a special bond. This is one of the main reasons why people remember certain presents that they receive. Occasions like 18th, 21st or 50th birthday, weddings, 1st anniversary or having a baby, new house-warming or retirement, 1st job or graduation day are all such special milestones on which people receive or give special presents. Along with the celebratory day, the gifts add to the joy and enjoyment. Likewise, any presents that have monetary value or a great practical use like say a car or a refrigerator always reminds one of the giver. Since that person has managed to bring about a change in one's life it is hard to forget such a gesture.
Thus, any gift given to mark a special occasion or a present that brings about a change to one's life is always cherished and remembered. It is symbolic of the love and affection a person has.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ays manage to light up a person. and if its a special one then, needless to say it ...
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...cial one then, needless to say it makes ones day. Regardless of age, presents ma...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ward to my birthday as that was the day i got lots of gifts. On that day everythi...
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Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...y my father on my 10th birthday. It was very unique for its time. I wore it to school every...
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Suggestion: every day
...nique for its time. I wore it to school everyday and proudly showed it off to one and al...
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...the gifts add to the joy and enjoyment. Likewise any presents that have monetary value o...
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...erator always reminds one of the giver. Since that person has managed to bring about ...
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... has managed to bring about a change in ones life it is hard to forget such a gestur...
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...a present that brings about a change to ones life is always cherished and remembered...
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Suggestion:
...the love and affection a person has.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46728971963 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55168523221 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3666964399 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4736842105 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155523477692 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521536544698 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055414803631 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919568566258 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447723742677 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.