In many countries, weddings are large and more expensive than in the past, why do you think this is the case?is it a positive or negative development.
In plenty nations these days, marriages are celebrated in an elaborate and extravagant ways which is not like that in the olden days. I believe this have a demerit development as people opinion that wedding done this way show the affluence of couple's parents and it also determine the successfulness of the wedlock there after.
To begin with, parents of the couple that is about to be wedded believe that, this is the period they can show how wealthy they are to the community by ensuring that the most expensive materials and equipment are used for their children' wedding not putting into consideration how this couple will fare after. For instance,the dailys shows that 90% of marriage expenses are been covered by the parents because they know that their children does not have financial responsibility to do so. In addition, for these couple to be involved, they also spent their little savings for the marriage leaving them with nothing to cater for themselves after wedlock.
Secondly,most people opinion that marriage done in expensive ways will always determine the successful of the marriage. During the marriage, dignitaries were invited so no matter how either of the couple is been abused especially the wife will not want to seek help so as not to exposed the husband.As their wedding will always be use as a point of reference to the other family members or society. Such is seen,in these days marriages as they will be feeling ashamed to speak out as lot of money was invested for the hole matrimony.
To conclude with,i believe doing wedding in a big way is believed by many individuals to determine how long it will last and also how wealthy their parents are and this have its negative impact on the couple as many suffer after both financially and physically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86513157895 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62060004217 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4813138929 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.333333333 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7777777778 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105503585785 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479674946889 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468067550653 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755771820071 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395850637922 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.