Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Many working individuals are having plethora of health issues because they hardy get time to do exercise. I will describe the reasons of not getting enough exercise and some several ways to get rid off this issue in my further paragraph before forming an opinion at the end.
To embark on, in India, it is regulated by the head of the nation that one should work 48 hours per week, not more than that. However, in many private organizations, the employees are seen working almost 12 hours per day, which is not at all acceptable. Furthermore, most of the well paid salaried jobs are available only in metro cities due to which people need to stay a way from their family as a result most of the individuals are staying alone in rented houses. Moreover, the rent houses are another issue for those people, since it is not possible to get rented apartment nearby your office. Apparently, they need to travel about an hour to office. So, do you think after hectic schedule at office followed by hour-long travels, is it possible to manage for a normal person to go to gym or workout at home? Because, he or she needs to prepare dinner as well. Some individuals even skipped their dinner or breakfast because of this hectic schedule as they got exhausted, which lead to health issue like gastric and many other diseases.
To conclude, there are several ways that can help individuals to stay fit although they are working somewhere. Firstly, government should impose more employment not only in metro cities but also in other small towns. Secondly, government need to take stringent action towards those companies who pressurized their employee to work more than 48 hours a week. Finally, organizations should provide a recreation room which contains few board such as to play table tennis, by which help the employees to reduce not only their stress but also they can stay fit by playing a little during working hours at spare time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun board seems to be countable; consider using: 'few boards'.
Suggestion: few boards
...rovide a recreation room which contains few board such as to play table tennis, by which ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77910447761 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4905363315 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.726285897 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238943939354 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076721012562 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672304584374 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175232631008 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634996744727 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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