In some areas of the us a curfew is imposed in which teenager are not allowed to be out doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
what is your opinion about this?
Some people ponder that in some regions of the us a curfew is very essential for the kids .The root can that adolesecent think that they could not permission we visited in any ways than children do not allowed late night party and outdoor activities.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are multiheads. There most predominant todays technology is very fast.Hence anyone use the electronic gadgets in our life.Therefore juveniles are plethora time using electronic material.For instance cell phone ,computer, laptop and tablets so on.children can addicted about the application. However they always think that we could take obligation and they would follow on rules .As well as they can not listen to parent speak to teenager neither children stop late night party and they always visit him/her.
Nevertheless,there are no dying,in my point of view government should give good rules of their society.otherwise,i think that laws can provide band for children late night in the club as far as they are superb impact on teenager life .For example , late night is very dangerous of kids like raped,human trafficking cracked,thief,
murder and extra.last but not the least government must not allowed a curfew areas over 15 ages.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand laws always give good rules of community.Thus,anyone respect and follow rules in our life.on other hand the curfew areas is not safe for juvenles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18623481781 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09035951473 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.826379646 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.5 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.1666666667 20.7667163134 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161675893546 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701737237531 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516724942737 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875308109119 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396317598273 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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