Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Since the day our consciousness brain got triggered, we started to choose the option according to our wish. Some people believe that now, we have a plethora of choices to choose when compared with the past. I feel that it is true because of the innovation of new products in sectors like food and shopping, and education.
Back in the day's people saw the new products only at the rate of snail's speed. However, it is a completely different picture for the people in the 21st century. To Illustrate, since the birth of online shopping and food delivery applications people got enthralled by its inventions in products and a variety of foods. Not to mention, many even got ruffled-up with the number of choices they have. Thus, people living in the current generations have various numbers of platforms to choose than the people in the past.
Moreover, in terms of education, universities have provided so many branches of studies for students. When compared with the ten decades ago. This helped the students to focus only on the particular field, and not to worry about the rest, which they are not interested to pursue. On the other hand, it also benefited the society. For example, in the past, in the field of medicine, there will be only one person to check the body. But, in recent times, since the ramification of many specialized courses in medicine, such as an orthopaedic, gastroenterologist, and urologist, and many more, People can get counselling from the particular specialist.
In conclusion, from the above points, I entrench the idea that people who are living at present have a number of choices than who lived in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... many branches of studies for students. When compared with the ten decades ago. This...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of choices than who lived in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87900355872 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79921233948 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1944440872 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170180497904 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535630598336 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057562588872 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999993451201 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332154936481 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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