The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
An increasing concern for many people around the world is the large number of overweight people who might threat people's healthy life as well as adding pressure on health care system. it's often said that involving an alternative tutorials about physical education in schools’ programs is the right solution to this issue, however others may argue that. I totally agree with the effective role of physical information in helping in reducing this problem for reasons I'll outline below.
From an overall perspective, there are a range of reasons why some people believe that physical education is very helpful and should be taught. Perhaps the main reason I agree with the ideas that schools should teach sport classes is because people will become aware of the dangers of being in overweight and the consequences behind that. A good illustration of this is the fast increase of the percentage of diseases due to lack of sports and activities. furthermore, they will be less active in everyday life which might impact their incomes and time negatively.
Another interesting factor in support of this is how to deal with obesity in case it happened. this is because even though people are overweight, but they remain increase their situation to the worst. For example, they keep consuming harmful foods such as sugar, cheese and some other drinks. If they are educated about how to eliminate from obesity, they would have eaten and acted differently.
In conclusion, Obesity is a topic which is very relevant in modern society. overall, I would have to say to a large extent I agree with the idea that school curriculums should cover physical education lessons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06545454545 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62549483726 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8638120917 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271255789994 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828659496039 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674863136714 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149543788735 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731203015808 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.