You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
- Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Sara,
Hope you are doing well. it has been a long time since we last met. First of all congratulations on completing your graduation additionally, I have received your letter asking for a piece of advice on whether to go for a job or continue studies.
In my opinion, going back to college is not a good idea as it would mean going back into the same environment. Additionally, if you continue with your studies it will not provide any additional exposure thus making your life monotonous. I am also aware of the financial condition of your family so I would not suggest putting an additional financial burden on your parents at this stage. Hence I suggest going for a job which will not only enable to gain valuable work experience but also help you to become financially strong. Moreover, the trend nowadays is to gain work experience which proves to be a pivotal parameter while applying for post-graduation programs. Therefore students who have work experience are given priority while applying for admissions in reputed universities.
Lastly, I would recommend to look out for a job in software design or testing as it would be related to your field of study.
I hope you will consider my valuable advice and make the right decision.
Best wishes
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Sara, Hope you are doing well. it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...l burden on your parents at this stage. Hence I suggest going for a job which will no...
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Line 4, column 669, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... applying for post-graduation programs. Therefore students who have work experience are g...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84403669725 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85950219419 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3063142871 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23656508231 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074019645741 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694055024957 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138598765639 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634035544873 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.